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FEATURE: Choose refined alternatives for the verb 'get'
WORD POWER: Strengthen your vocabulary SPOTLIGHT: EditPros clients in the news
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Some words that are acceptable in conversations are inadvisable in business writing because they either are colloquial, imprecise or they have multiple meanings. One such word is the verb "get"which also happens to be objectionable because it's crass.
Think of a sweaty guy with matted hair, a torn T-shirt, two-day beard stubble and gapped yellow teeth ogling a television set in a display window as he mutters, "I'm gonna get me one of them."
Think of a movie scene in which a handcuffed criminal being led past his accuser snarls, "I'm gonna get you, man!"
A declaration, therefore, by a business executive about intentions to get a larger market share is uninspiring.
Although "get" is a legitimate verb that appears in Shakespearean literature, dictionary usage panel members consider some of its many uses "nonstandard"in other words, slang. Contemporary dictionaries identify as many as 30 distinct definitions for "get." It can mean to obtain, to take by force, to cause, to prepare, to persuade, to perceive, to stimulate emotional involvement; it can indicate necessity, understanding or revenge.
While use of "get" may offer the most expedient way to express an idea, more thoughtful alternatives can command greater respect. Here's a list of common expressions involving variations of "get," followed by preferable equivalents.
To obtain
We've got 1.5 million signatures.
We've collected 1.5 million signatures.
To receive, as a gift
She got that book for her birthday.
That book was a gift for her birthday.
To purchase
We've decided to get new furniture for the meeting room.
We've decided to buy new furniture.
To earn
I got my master's degree three years ago.
I earned my master's degree.
To begin
Let's get working.
Let's start working.
To become
With her ambition, she'll get to be president.
She has the ambition to become president.
To arrive
We should get there before 3 p.m.
We should arrive before 3 p.m.
To board a vehicle
It's time to get on the bus.
It's time to board the bus.
To return
We'll get back on Saturday.
We'll return on Saturday.
To undergo
Tom got searched by security agents at the airport.
Security agents searched Tom at the airport.
To inflict with disease
She's worried about getting Lyme disease.
She's worried about contracting Lyme disease.
To receive as punishment
The convicted robber got four years in prison.
The convicted robber was sentenced to four years in prison.
To comprehend
I don't get it.
I don't understand.
To discover
What did you get out of that class?
What did you learn in that class?
To determine or solve
I got the answer.
I calculated the answer.
To evoke emotions
Dorothea Lange's photographs really get to me.
The precise meaning of that statement is unclear.
Specify how they "get to you"for example:
Dorothea Lange's photographs convey such desperation.
Dorothea Lange's photographs remind me how fortunate I am.
Dorothea Lange's photographs penetrate people's souls.
To annoy or irritate
His arrogance really gets to me.
His arrogance really annoys me.
To become or grow to be
Billy got a lot taller.
Billy grew a lot taller.
State of necessity or obligation
I've got to go.
I must leave.
The verb "get" also appears as a component of a large number of idiomatic expressions and phrasal verbs. You can get up early and get going so you can get ahead in life, trying in the meantime to get by with a modest budget, get in touch with friends, get after people who impede your progress, lecture them to get over your disagreements, see if you can get a rise out of unresponsive people, try to get around cumbersome regulations, and hope you will not get sick and be forced to get to bed.
Because "get" often substitutes for the verb "have," its use is redundant in sentences containing contractions of "have." For example, the uncontracted form of the sentence "I've got to go" is "I have got to go." In that case, "got" is superfluous; "I have to go" or "I must go" will suffice.
Be aware that the past-participle form "gotten" is unrelated to the adjective "misbegotten," which means unlawfully or illegally conceived. It also means illegitimate or disreputable. "Begotten" is a past participle of "beget," which means to father or sire.
The verb "get" does have its place. A traveler who says he "shall retrieve" his luggage (rather than saying he is "going to get" his luggage) typically would be considered pompous. So don't feel compelled to banish "get" in your business writing, but use it with discretion.
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